Score: 6

"Nice for a stick movie."

submission: Infestation: Genesis ep.2

date: June 24, 2006

It was an overall good movie, with the advantages of smooth simple graphics, some 3D, and music, though I must say the music wasn’t a good idea, it kept playing when the yellow guy died as well as after the movie ends, I’d suggest you fix that, it just doesn’t make it look good. It was well animated and drawn, and beside the music I have no real complaints. Keep up the good work.

Stats:

Graphics: 7, it was decently animated and drawn, I may not be a big fan of sticks, but this movie was ok with them. Not bad graphics overall.

Style: 5, Sort of an action movie I suppose, not bad but the music didn’t match the style you tried to give to the movie, improve that.

Sound: 6, Effects were decent but the music had its problems. It played when the guy dies which is just plain wrong, and it plays after the movie ends, fix that.

Violence: 7, Some amount of fighting, nothing too bloody, it’s just sticks after all. Some more blood would help the movie a great deal more.

Interactivity: 4, It had a play button and a website link, more than most movies have, good. Try adding scene select, seek, quality controls, and sound controls.

Humor: 3,Nothing really humorous here so…

Overall: 6,Above average work, very nice movie overall, keep up the good work.

Score: 7

"Pretty good."

submission: Black & white fun

date: June 24, 2006

I liked your skill with flash, but sadly, despite having good skills in animation you aren’t making anything with a plot, you’d go much further with a true storyline in your flash. Your graphical skills are impressive, I’d suggest you continue with flash all the way to your own series. But seemingly, you stuck to plot less shorts. Never the less, good luck in making flash in the future and I truly hope you will improve. Keep up the good work.

Also, you may want to consider adding normal music to the flash beside the sound effects, it would sure make things more…Casual and better, somewhat.

And now, we dramatically move to the boring statistics:

Graphics: 9, Well drawn, same applies to the animation. All you need now is a plot, a real plot to make sure your movies have a meaning and will me more popular for it.

Style: 1, It had some humor but overall it was stripped of plot and had no style in specific, I am forced to emphasize that a plot would really help.

Sound: 3, All it had was sound effects, unfortunately a movie of this kind is better of with at least some music, food for thought about next time.

Violence: 2, A ball struck the little living ball after he killed 3 other balls with a toxic fart. Violent? Not sure, borderline insanity? You bet your ass it is.

Interactivity: 3, A play button, which was about all, though as this was a meaningless short it didn’t need more, but after making 30 reviews today, I’m getting sick of play buttons, nothing personal.

Humor: 6, It has some random humor like the deadly fart and so on, but it needs actual humor, which for you will need a plot, hopefully is in progress.

Overall: 7, Not a bad overall movie, but you need to find a plot. But on the bright side, this review is the longest you got in this submission, so I will rant on. Just kidding, good luck.

Score: 9

"Funny and immature."

submission: ghetto ghilligan Part II

date: June 24, 2006

Very interesting movie, it was funny in an immature way, freaking hilarious. Very well drawn and beautifully animated. Voices were great and well synchronized. And the humor? Amazing, I’ve never seen something so immature make me laugh. All the black characters’ behavior was great, the Arnold Schwarzenegger sound board was also funny, and Elvis? The greatest twist I’ve seen in months. Keep up the good work my friend.

The stats:

Graphics: 10, Incredibly animated and drawn, fit well for the sounds and all, couldn’t have asked for more, well I could, but I doubt it exists.

Style: 9, An amazing parody and comedy, I absolutely loved it.

Sound: 10, Voices and music were nothing short of astounding, very clear and funny too.

Violence: 8, mostly the eye poking but it still counts, and it was also funny. 3 Stooges kind of joke.

Interactivity: 3, A play button but I don’t think it needed any more than that.

Humor: 8, Very funny in several ways, the parody, the joked and gags. The sick humor. All of that combined, just makes me laugh.

Overall: 9, Great movie, can’t wait to the next installment.

Score: 7

"Good movie."

submission: 'the garden'

date: June 24, 2006

It was a bit silent but to the point. Smooth, good looking visually, and just overall nice. It has a moral, too bad I don’t think any one will pay real attention to it. It was a good flash movie in general, interesting idea.

Stats:

Graphics: 7, Well animated and drawn. All the graphics were fluent, smooth and looked fitting for the movie

Style: 7, Sort of a lesson to be learned from this I guess.

Sound: 6, Nice music, interesting. Simple but interesting.

Violence: 5, Well , a man eating flower is in the movie, but other than that…

Interactivity: 3, Just the play button.

Humor: 5, kind of funny when the 2 guys turn into flowers.

Overall: 7, A good movie, with a moral, how rare…

Score: 10

"Unbelievable."

submission: Saint - Chapter 2

date: June 24, 2006

I have done some reading about the Templar ( beside the Da Vinci code ) and I do love the idea you are using for a movie. It has stunning graphics, voices were as real as if beside me. Some blood and gore were obvious considering the true past of the Templar and the church. A great movie, I can’t wait for the next one to be out already. Keep going.

Stats:

Graphics: 10, Stunning visuals, same with animation. It was incredible, I have nothing but praises about the graphics.

Style: 9, A thriller, adventure in one. I really like it.

Sound: 10, Great music, astounding music. Fit in perfectly.

Violence: 9, There was a good amount of blood and stuff in the movie

Interactivity: 3, A play button, but the movie makes up for anything it may have lacked in Interactivity.

Humor: 1, It wasn’t to be funny, just good.

Overall: 10, Awesome movie…

P.S: This was written on June 20th but posted on the 24th for other reasons, so I saw among the first, yay for me.

Score: 9

"Good dress up game."

submission: Manga girl Dress Up V2

date: June 24, 2006

This is a completely normal and nice dress up game, of course the nudity also helps make it easier on the eyes. The cloth selection fit well, so did the type of clothes and hair, I also enjoyed the types of clothes available. I think you did well in this game. Graphics are decent, too bad it didn’t have any sound, oh and if I may suggest adding another color change, her skin, some people would like to vary that as well, some games already do that.

A briefing of your scores:

Graphics: 8, Pretty well drawn and all. So were the backgrounds, visually, this game was good in every graphic aspect I can find.

Style: 7, Well, it’s a dress up game, of a woman. No wonder it passed judgment.

Sound: 0, You really should consider adding some music, a few nice loops from the audio portal would change a lot.

Violence: 0, I have seen violence in dress up games before, but that was when you could pin knifes and weapons and wounds on a character, since this is a female dress up there is no need for it.

Interactivity: 7, Everything fit and moved well. Congratulations.

Humor: 0, Well, did any one find humor in a dress up game?

Overall: 9, Great work making this game, keep up the good work.

Score: 8

"Fun and simple game."

submission: Squares: Revamped

date: June 24, 2006

This game was surprisingly good even though it’s very simple, evidence that not every game today has to have staggering graphics to be considered good, sometimes the classics are just better. The game was very smooth, had plenty of interest in it. Brought a smile to my face, just pure fun. Keep up the good work.

And since I almost always explain my scoring here is your game statistics:

Graphics: 8, Basic plain motion, but that does not mean it is inferior to any other game.

Style: 7, An action game that felt like one and is easy and fun to play.

Sound: 8, Music was alright, I guess no sound effects were even needed around here.

Violence: 0, Em…None?

Interactivity: 7, Pretty fun with plenty of game modes to keep you busy, good work.

Humor: 0, I’d be considered insane if this game made me laugh…

Overall: 8, Good game, good work, good overall. Keep it up.

Score: 7

"Not a bad game."

submission: Escape from Zombie Town 0

date: June 24, 2006

Basically in this game, you run away from zombies, unable to defend yourself from them in hope of escaping. Not a bad game, didn’t take a lot of effort to finish and it was fun while it lasted, but there was nothing captivating about the game so I’m not exactly running to play the other games, it needs to be more interesting, the plot, improve, really. But overall, for a game, compared with the majority of NG submissions, it’s good. Keep it up.

Technical briefing, tips, and explanation to your score:

Graphics: 7, Nicely drawn but you can do much better, also, really improve the guy’s walk cycle. It was rather bad, but overall nice animation.

Style: 6, A survival/action/horror game I suppose, it didn’t do that well on either of them but if that’s the genre you choose then go ahead for all I care.

Sound: 7, Music was ok, no complaints but nothing praise worthy as well.

Violence: 5, Not much of it, it should have more. It’s supposed to be more horror.

Interactivity: 6, The walking was ok, just that the walk cycle looked lame.

Humor: 1, Funny walk cycle the guy had, that’s about it.

Overall: 7, It was on ok game but it needs work, even if you have made sequels.

Score: 7

"Great FBF."

submission: Super Smash Bros

date: June 24, 2006

I love FBF movies and this one was very good, I liked all of the shapes, moves and everything in this movie, FBF allows so much freedom with animation. Very good motion and all. I really enjoyed watching it, and it’s well done with only one thousand frames used. I hope you continue making flash movies, keep it up.

Stats:

Graphics: 8, As a frame by frame animation it’s good, very smooth and fast.

Style: 7, A fighting movie, which is nice. But common enough.

Sound: 8,Good music and sounds effects, worked well.

Violence: 8, Plenty of cool fighting moves.

Interactivity: 3, A play button.

Humor: 1, Fighting isn’t funny…now.

Overall: 7, good movie, but very common, not much to make it unique.

Score: 6

"Decent."

submission: Just a Sip

date: June 24, 2006

Not a bad movie, concentrated on humor, which wasn’t ok, drawing and animation were fine, nothing too bad or amazing either, just a fun short. The subject was ok. I think you should have changed the music though, it was a bit annoying at times. Other than that, it was pretty good, you should continue with flash, you have a pretty good shot if you decide to keep making them.

Stats:

Graphics: 7, Well drawn in an FBF form, animations was smooth and clear, good for a first submission.

Style: 6, Pretty good overall, it was a comedy style movie, which I like…Not badly executed either.

Sound: 8, The song is ok but rather annoying at the beginning, I’d recommend it changed.

Violence: 0, It’s a song about soda drinks, Pigs will fly before this movie is considered violent.

Interactivity: 2, Guess what, a play button… Great.. I’d recommend you add some more control to the viewer, scene select. Quality control, sound control, that sort of stuff, it would make the movie better, trust me on this one.

Humor: 6, It had humor, nothing hilarious but decent enough to watch.

Overall: 6, Not bad overall, but you should have kept making them.