Score: 8

"Lots of potential."

submission: Gitarre

date: October 11, 2009

This game carries a lot of potential for a children's game and all around coloring, but while the choices were pretty good, I still think some minor improvements would make this about as flawless as this genre can be, such as wooden patterns added to the smooth guitar texture and the ability to add more background and accessories.

It still should remain uncluttered, as it is now, but with some minor additions to satisfy the purists. Otherwise it's a very good and very simple, low maintenance game.

Score: 6

"Basic and unrewarding."

submission: The Great Naruto Quiz

date: February 16, 2009

While Newgrounds is stock filled of Hentai related games and quizzes, the key is to make the quiz as pleasant as the consequent adult images.

Your music buttons collided with the text of the question, which was on its own simple and under-achieving. I suggest moving them somewhat, also separating the text from the button, so it's not so childish and amateur that the text is not part of the button, but rather just slapped on the button.

Make more questions and at least make a back button for the images, which would be better in full resolution. Some original artwork would make at more attractive than what appears to be no more than obscene Google images results.

The newgrounds BBS has a Flash and programming section, if you need help with those things, as well as dozens of tutorials.

Good luck in the future.

Score: 9

"Fun but somewhat frustrating"

submission: Armed with Wings 2

date: December 24, 2008

I'm giving you a nine out of ten and one of my extremely rare reviews to notify you your game was very fun and interesting. Since 300 other reviews mark the good of your game, I'll try and help with the "not so good".

The jumping mechanism (duh) is frustrating for the most part. Not impossible, but uncomfortable too. If you could just manage the post-jump slide and create an efficient run n' jump this could be a ten star game. Otherwise, beautiful, captivating game and I suggest you add small touch ups and add-on's every now and again to keep it interesting.

Score: 8

"Well done."

submission: A Dive Into The Dark Jungle

date: February 1, 2008

Not usually a fan of tracks like this, but I'm trying to expand my music sources, so you'll do. Good work; you may continue.

Score: 7

"Cheery."

submission: Wild Popcorn

date: July 3, 2006

A cheery music overall, I'm not the cheery type, but I'd assume it's good even for them. If I were you, I'd stick to the dark stuff, well done none the less Oce.

Score: 7

"It was ok."

submission: La Menthe (Remix)

date: July 3, 2006

A short and nice loop, you can kind of hear it limp after two bits but it can be fixed, overall nice action typr music popular with submissions.